Overall i am pleased with the film i think the idea was very good but could have been filmed better.The areas i would improve in would be the filming as i was directing next time i will make sure the camera is steady to avoid shake shots.I would also have more close up shots to add drama and to show the characters expressions.
To improve the production i would retake the shots of the vase falling and make sure i do the white balance.Also i think the scene at the start of Rachel is too long so i would retake that shot and use more close up shots to make it more interesting and have more dialogue .The reason for so much continuity is that we filmed the shots on different days so their was obvious areas.
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